WINOL Critical Reflection Y3

WINOL’s circulation this semester needed a boost; it was a slow start but still a rise on last year. Initially, figures started at 270 unique IPs and 206 new users. Although not staggering numbers, WINOL could have around 400 viewers from these stats as the university has one IP. The team made improvements weekly as we upped social media and created an Instagram and Pinterest. WINOL progressed on Alexa every week but was not a huge competitor in student journalism; we are still below our rivals. We need to sell our content, it’s good enough but what’s the point if nobody is watching it. The latest figures are up to 404 unique IPs with viewers staying on the site for longer and looking at more articles. Viewers are coming for the bulletin and staying for the features.

Our biggest views should come from Wednesdays as deadlines are all centred round the Newsday. To gain a more widespread audience we could have a trickle of content coming onto the site throughout the week. We do not want viewers to log on and think that it is not being updated and effectively a dead site. Last year we had this influx of text stories from different beats and features, however the team is more focused on video leading the site this semester.

WINOL introduced the role of social media this year. We needed to be more disciplined with this; it’s a credible role to have and worthwhile but we needed strict deadlines for the team. We should have had a minimum of social media tasks for each member; more shares, more follows and, more likes equal more views and more credibility. This would make us the place to go for local news, sports and features. We reached our goal from last year to 2000 twitter followers by running a competition to our audience.

We also had a graphics role this year, which excelled; we kept up with the changing times of journalism and were able to produce some great graphics in picture lacking stories. The quality of these was not only to fill space but really added something to packages. With the introduction of new titles, WINOL looked more professional and increased our credibility.

WINOL’s main issue is audience – it’s unclear whether to focus on campus or Hampshire news. I think this was a particular issue with the Super Features bulletin; there were aspects of the show that were dependent on families and friends watching, for example the Christmas jumper Flipagram. Remember that journalism is for the people.

Features has come on so far due to great leadership and direction. The team churned out fantastic, strong video led content. We launched the new W2 site with Laura Trant as guest, which has been very successful. WINOL established rules that we do not have any bad photos, as the team are improving we are having to remove old content to meet the new standard. Visually, all features are excelling with different beats to attract all different audiences. However, across the board packages are lacking an angle and some features have left viewers thinking and what? This needs to be a focus for next semester because we have cracked the visuals but the other aspect is to sell the story – if you have no angle why would anybody watch it. You should never produce something without thinking about the audience.

Super Features was the ultimate test for the team. We filled the airtime easily and it was a great opportunity to showcase features, practice for the General Election and give studio roles to members not involved in Newsdays. The production was visually striking but it lacked substance in the angle as I mentioned. Some of the packages were disappointing in that commentary could have been re-voiced and re-scripted and sections on VTs were perhaps too long. The whole broadcast needed a thread throughout and to be tied together at the end – to entertain the audience from start to finish. Technically the bulletin ran smoothly through the gallery and studio, there were merely some content issues. I worked the VT machine for the broadcast without any issues or missed cues. This very first two hour production for the team was impressive and there is no reason why we cannot produce more feature bulletins.

Sport is another triumph this year; we have a stronger and larger sports team than previous years and new ideas. There has been a good variety of features and match coverage – Sportsweek got brought back due to the volume of content. Tough Mudder was one of the stand-out pieces with great shots from all different angles, good grabs and fantastic access to a national event on our doorstep. Goal of the month was a great success as well, the idea behind this was so simple yet the scope for audience interaction and views is huge. The Eastleigh match postponement fire story was great to get and each week the team has improved PTCs and scripting/voices. It has been an exceptional term for sport.

As Environment Correspondent, my aim was to produce packages on national news stories with a local angle – not every week but most – getting into the headlines as much as possible. Overall, I am extremely pleased with what I have achieved. I produced four packages, all of which were national stories, three were in the headlines and added multiple OOVs to the bulletin throughout the term. My Remembrance Day package was a re-edited and re-voiced report made of Stephen’s clips. I also produced three comment pieces as a columnist and presented one week and, was news editor the other – these were on top of my aims. I feel like I developed hugely this semester – I am much more confident with writing to pictures and voicing. In my own time, I practiced annunciation and emphasis on scripts – Angus picked up on this extra work. I am much more confident with PTCs now, this semester I produced my first walkie talkie and experimented with my involvement in packages i.e getting on the horse. Last semester, I was struggling with the scripting now I think it is one of the most enjoyable aspects. I have greatly improved my editing skills – obsessing over every detail paying particular focus to my sound edits and blends. I now have the basics firmly in place and this gives me more room to hone in on the finer details. I am a chess player reporter – knowing my timeline before going out on location, I’m telling the story.

My strongest report came at the end of this semester with badgers. It was great to get Chris Packham and the CEO of Badger Trust – they were great talkers and provided good grabs. This package had so many pictures from all different angles right into the action and the sound was crisp and natural. The PTC really added to this package – I made sure I was in the march and walked out of the shot so viewers could see the action behind me. I wanted to highlight the words in the DEFRA statement to make it more interesting and look like the news – this I achieved painstakingly but I learned from my previously static milk statement. My report was commended by the charity and is on the Badger Trust website as coverage of the protest and I have been asked to film future protests in London for the charity. I feel that my comment piece on the cost of badger culling is one of my strongest articles as well but I am looking forward to more features training next semester. My text story scooped Hampshire Chronicle by a few hours on the Wednesday. I also scooped ITV by a week on my milk package, which I thought was really strong and one of my best produced so far. I worked hard on package promotion this semester – sharing links on social media, putting them on forums and forwarding to contacts – every package has more views than last semester’s work.

My week as News Editor went really well; I maintained control of the bulletin from the moment the last week’s show went out until my bulletin was broadcast. Six of the stories from news conference were followed through to broadcast and did not fall through; I made sure that reporters knew what I was expecting including shots, angles and quotes. I arranged extra rehearsals on the Tuesday for the gallery team and Tate, and communicated constantly between production, Tate and reporters. I also made text stories a priority this week so they trickled through continuously throughout Wednesday and were all published before broadcast. This was the first week we broadcast on time, the first time we had an as live this semester and we didn’t have to re-record any links; the week had discipline and aims.

I wouldn’t describe any of my packages as weak but my most disappointing report was on horses. The lenses for the camera were designed for mid-focus so the interviews are marginally soft and I would have preferred better sequences with the vet but time was restricted. I also could have worked on my PTC and relaxed more. I could have improved my graphic in the milk package by putting a move on it and in turn simplifying it frame by frame. My week of presenting wasn’t my strongest; I struggled with the in-studio chat and was nervous but towards the end links I had much more relaxed into it. I think for the first time my script needed improving but wasn’t too bad.

News as a whole, technically, has improved massively with most reporters using DSLRs and coming up with good news. Top stories include: Stephen’s coverage of the Southampton gas explosion, the Ferguson riots two-way with our sister college and, Nick Clegg’s interview. These particularly made use of great contacts and are stories with legs.

Another highlight, was Politics and Power; it had a great variety of components, made use of contacts for the in-studio debate, included impressive graphics from the titles to graphic analysis, presenting was extremely strong and just needed refining.

For WINOL, links need to be in on Tuesday night without fail, there needs to be more communication between teams, every reporter must come to conference with back up stories and, we need to make rehearsal time for Newsdays. We also need to have an on the day story every single week – whether that is a live or a package. Reporters need to build contacts and sign up to press releases as some of our biggest stories came direct from inboxes this semester.

 

WINOL Critical Reflection Y3

W2 Bulletin Debrief

Prolific but should be half the length, entertain an audience all the way through, flabby at the end, joined up fill to the whole thing, have a thread

In studio presentation was really nice, relationships were good when relaxed

Some real stand out pieces: cooking unbelievably well shot, stylisation, lights, many aspects brilliant, more voiceover? Cooking is personality led

Really good content nice ideas, news features needed changing, great fashion and cooking, nice to take it out of the box

Voices need work! Speak slower and annunciate

Sound is difficult but really needs work

Fashion nicely shot, good crisp light, give info – graphics on prices?
Find a blend to inform audience
Play around with angles, funkier
Shoot a lot to make it snappy, need around four seconds per shot

Sound needs to bleed through
Very professional gallery
Engage with the audience the whole time – develop personalities in the studio, remember the tone
Be selective in story telling, looking for an angle, aggressively tackling it

Sophie’s in studio baking, needed to be more fun and was too long but great idea

Really good overall, tone with a lot of packages is wrong need to think about the audience, need to engage more with people who are watching, involving ourselves too much, needed to see people in Christmas jumpers not us

Music – we needed to hear the music performances and not ask all the same questions

Jacqueline Wilson – very good interview just be careful not to talk too much

Maybe do a features WINOL next year weekly

 

W2 Bulletin Debrief

WINOL 1st December Bulletin Debrief

It’s been a great semester – especially in features, it’s taken a huge turn as news inherited lots of good work from the previous semester.

Features are genuinely worth watching this year, views are in the hundreds which is great for student work. There’s lots of creativity in the editing, hard work and effort. Great for the magazine world, we’re producing content in volume and to a good standard.

The professionalism of WINOL is outstanding, being compared to the industry by guest editors and interviewees.

Features is very strong but reporters need to be brave enough to lead features with their personality, for example fashion and cooking. We need more gonzo and more fun.

Laura Trant was very impressed with innovation of W2 and all features content.

Caroline Hendry- Confetti Editor in Ireland
Justina Chlad- Technical Director

Features is showing, news is telling – in PTCs we need more movement see Ian Sherwood’s comments on PTC being your trademark/signature

We need to see more from sports, ask to use go pros in the net and be creative.

This semester, we used a few two-ways but we need to look into using the tricaster and avoid faking them up. It needs to be conversational and not look scripted.

Be more adventurous with your filming; features is production led. Think about what you do to make the best TV. Get people doing things.

Wine festival, telling a story and having a quest. Have a gizmo for a feature, point of transformation is the middle

Deconstructed, you see the person making the package, sound person head on? Very fashionable

Wide shot, mid shot, close up – make more of a variety, shots are too long

Put move on interviewee, establish NATSOT with wide shot on the wine expert. Too much music? Hit the stings with a change of shot. Split screen, film work is brilliant, fact captions make more of, watch out for continuity, change music bed, hit the stings with your edit, PTC needs improving

1. Think of the story
2. Stand it up

5 stupid things – Use the sound to punctuate, not a hum in the background, removes all the texture from the different stories, too cute, too angry needs a sophisticated tone, out of sync, Cherelle good presenting, needs a Have I Got News For  You style

Dream date – Decided whats going to be on the screen, drawing before we touched the camera, knew what she was doing, grip, clear vision, graphics missed out, good choice of music, should all have own theme tunes, PTC must be walking, feels in the wrong place

Never ask the viewer a question – amateurish
Fundamental idea is good just needs some work

*An idea was delivered*

Baking – Christmas music is perfect, good commentary over the pictures of baking constantly, varied music

Bulletin:

Sell that we are a sister college, great graphic, not a conversation, Tate can’t react

Badgers: Natural sound opening shot, well above any kind of expectation, should be doing that in the industry after a few years, World Cup quarter final, never seen a PTC as thought out, timed, put together scripted like that, amazing, nobody could reasonably expect it from a student, so visually strong throughout, texture of sound, good editing, lots of colour, perfect sequencing for interviews, outstanding, everything you need for tv, it’s a conflict A hit B, good research

Bracken: great, PTC seemed a bit rushed but to get the prison governor was brilliant 

WINOL 1st December Bulletin Debrief

Wednesday Debrief 26th November: Graham Bell

Good UPSOT in heads – strong heads overall. Possibly get rid of the strap lines – slightly unnecessary especially with strong pics. Keep sport of fight scene running, that’s all you needed no jump cut, might as well carry on it is non league football after all about as good as you get

No need for welcome from Tate it jumped a little but superb otherwise throughout, wire tuck in but gallery team should’ve picked that up

Brian’s story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why did we miss this?! BBC Wales came and covered it, it’s our patch and award winners segment was missed – should’ve made more of it. *Be proud of what you do in this room*

Running order heavy and, death essentially lead the bulletin. Needed more light and shade that’s why we moved the OOV, a dark hard show. People don’t watch the news to be told everything is terrible

FERGUSON: tight for interview, full credit to get into show, grammar wrong, more float over interview?
Nothing in bulletin that was today, but interview made it today, make them local, students in Ferguson to relate

NHS: everything great, but go to the people protesting first, UNISON after, give that story a face straight away, empathy

PRISON GANG: really good piece and interview in studio good, credibility with two shot, prison gov good get, little more decisive and believe what you’re saying but this comes with time
Have the confidence to deliver what you’re saying

BADGERS: PTC really good and walk out of shot busy background good, in middle of demo, celebrity! Incredible, beyond student work, loved it

OOV make more from BJTC, gas explosion needs more was left asking and what?? Should have been spiked there was nothing new here to report

IoW: top line wrong

ONE WAY SYSTEM: good time lapse but too long – cutaway to different time lapse?

CHRISTMAS MARKET: needed lightening up, still heavy, should’ve been a nice lighter piece, feel good time

Communication in teams for sport order, because Christmas market package wasn’t as uplifting could’ve gone straight into highlights to change the pace
Basingstoke fact wrong
Mention 5th goal

Features: click bait, strong

Wine story into the show? Re-edited?

Wednesday Debrief 26th November: Graham Bell

WINOL Analysis “Protestors hit out against ‘disaster’ badger culls”

In the HEADS

  • My opening shot grabs the attention of the viewer and there is rich NATSOT
  • good cameras, good sound, depth of field on interviews is great
  • good grabs and good gets i.e Chris Packham and CEO
  • PTC needs work – steady cam or more reporters? But just about works with marching. In the scene of the action and adds something to the package
  • I like the structure and the inclusion of Wildlife Aid’s badger pictures
  • Script could be stronger but tells the story
  • Good variety of shots – wide and tight
  • edit was easy but had to play with sound i.e match up save our badgers, stop the cull

 

WINOL Analysis “Protestors hit out against ‘disaster’ badger culls”

WINOL 24th November Bulletin Debrief

Website – 314 unique IPs have gone down, 6000 page views – more pages but less people looking. Gone back down on Alexa four and a half million

Daniel Radcliffe, baking, sport, vintage fair, Elly’s how to, bulletin normally most views

Fewer people sampling the site!

Slider needs changing/refreshing? Need to keep getting better, freshness

W2 is absolutely a triumph. Page views gone up, really reading it. Come for the news and they stay for the features, make the site sticky adding bulk. Outstanding visual quality, gets better every week. Confidence and willingness to be creative and do more, exploring

Keyword in gonzo got to have a quest! Always achieve something, make an objective. Progress is incredible

Nothing fills those unique IPs than football – live tweet etc, the place to go

Campus news, normally exclusive better of trying to do the biggest regional news. Not really focussed on a particular market

Sport needs to have a spectacular thing but no access

Picture dilemma with features and news

Really strong bulletin, so many VTs unchanged etc, great week

BROOKE: good dealing with legal issues, consent, use this as an example

 

WINOL 24th November Bulletin Debrief

WINOL 19th November Wednesday Debrief with Laura Trant (BBC South)

Really slick, easy to understand, engaging, didn’t drag, informative

Strong paced heads, fun gambling shots appropriate, good choice of actuality here

Rephrase link into Stephens package, be truthful, be aware of this

STEPHEN: Strong PTC, straight away drawn into story, needed some NATSOT or something, the pauses were slightly unnatural, Shirley towers context was good, neighbour good grab, could we have seen interviewee sooner? Very strong

JOB CUTS: Liked very top of piece, zoom in on pics was good, kind of arty but appropriate, good interview, good clip, more from police statement their POV could have added to this package

Should’ve had link to Bracken’s graphic; it didn’t naturally flow

BRACKEN: Really clear graphics, selected stats well, presentation was really strong, acknowledge the graphic if it’s there even green screen, hold paper flat

BROOKE: would’ve worked well on South Today, first line great to pictures, PTC excellent, case study really good really open and frank, actuality strong clip to hypnotherapist, fantastic graphics, very strong human interest piece

WOMEN BISHOPS: really important subject, link was religious/statement speak, would you say that to your friends? Link simpler. Priest was great, dream sound bite really. In titles? Vox pops added to this?

HORSES: loved the shots, strong first line, write really well, brave good decision for PTC, comfortable, see the people who were speaking for a bit longer, loved last line, ‘cracking stuff’, can really write to pics it’s a skill and you’ve got it

OOV delay: timing issues

DOGS: Good to break dogs and horses, strong but PTC static, film interviewee doing their job? Looks more relaxed

SPORT: good presentation, good pacy film, Twitter pics good, statement from web good, PTC slightly dark. Language used for football commentary great, give it a bit of oomph

LEONARD COHEN: good but why no more music? Move on stills good, simple piece but well told and good to tell

DANCING MAN: brilliant piece, talked about and watch again, great to see the photographs but not just flicking through album? lovely piece

Honestly impressed, standard high, imagination, creativity, would’ve definitely worked on South today

Zeena has a lovely voice and tone, use your charm, be light hearted, great presentation

One of the best programmes ever – Ian

Real structure to pieces – beginning, middle, end

Brooke highlight
Stephen access and interviews
Eyelines good this week
Programme mix was really nice
Mics nearer people

Suss out on the day how PTC should be – static or walking?

Be prepared to fight your own battles, stick to your guns and work with your colleagues. Have confidence in yourself, know what your strong points are

WINOL 19th November Wednesday Debrief with Laura Trant (BBC South)

WINOL Analysis “Horse owners hit by ‘devastating’ disease”

My opening shot grabs the attention of the viewer and there is rich NATSOT. I thought of the most obvious association for a horse that was the *clip clop* walking sound and aimed at getting this before I was on location. I knew exactly what my package was going to look like before I left the newsroom. I think it worked well but possibly could have had the horse coming towards the camera and not away for the first shot.

I tried an experimental PTC with getting on a horse, which I have never done before. I would have preferred if I’d been able to improve the script content wise in the PTC – this may have made it look more comfortable and less nervous.

I felt that my voice was quite confident and the presentation was clear, I was confident in writing script to pictures. I have taken the time to practice voicing and emphasis in my own time and I think you can see this improvement.

I really liked the structure of my package in the end after playing around with the VT. I tried two different edits and decided on this one because of the stronger NATSOT at the beginning. I really liked the sequences and close up shots in the piece with good use of ATMOS underlaying this. It was  a good idea to have the sycamore seed picture overlaying the introduction to Sharon to fully identify what I was talking about in the report.

Sharon Bayliss gave a great grab and Malcolm was a good speaker that simplified the warning and what it meant essentially. These were strong interviewees – it was a shame that they were slightly soft and Malcolm’s overlay was not as strong as it could have been, his eyeline was also slightly wrong. Next time I need better lenses from the loan counter! Both were outside with good sound and good colours.

I had a good range of shots on location from the stables – a nice variety of close and wide shots, the lighting helped with this package. The sound mix across the report was good and I had good, rich NATSOT throughout.

 

 

 

WINOL Analysis “Horse owners hit by ‘devastating’ disease”

WINOL 12th November Wednesday Debrief with Ian Sherwood (Sky News)

You get first hand experience – the cut and thrust of the business on this course. See and engage in every element of news gathering and production here.

CLEGG: good to get – great grabs, top line is good decent news, threat of UKIP, covered all issues in quotes/questions. PTCs should tell you something you don’t know or be analytical, have the backdrop of Clegg doing something, photo op etc, a PTC is your signature/ your stamp on the report, met the deadline

JAVID: great to get – cabinet members, rising star in Tories

SLAUGHTERHOUSE: great piece, strongest pics, important story

The biggest pain of being a journalist is phone bashing to get the access

ERIC – difficult when in your organisation, applaud to tackle this

EBOLA: fantastic story, told me something I didn’t know, would’ve had this higher up, international story really, look at aid and deployment, great to get interview, story about the people – top of the piece? Ebola victims getting treatment

RATS: telling something you don’t know, good to get the pics of rats

SPORT: could have made more of the exclusive interview – shout about it. Basingstoke commentary really writing to the pics and good to pause in the right places

REMEMBRANCE: good NATSOT, don’t want sound to overshadow what the person is saying fade out into the voice mix etc

FEATURES: fun and good tease, ticked along, really enjoyed that

Good varied but not a fantastic news week. Risks attached stories, taste and decency, accuracy

Pace was good on this week’s bulletin

Technical things – still need more pictures to tell the stories, too much Clegg need more GVs etc, not enough NATSOT on images. Isaac eyeline was wrong. General improvement of framing and in PTCs. Phone interviews words on only for audibility issue, spend that time on a cleaner edit

Remembrance overall was a great piece, nicely paced

JOURNALISM: Shifting towards phone first – citizen journalism, social media, verification

*For people about the people*

WINOL 12th November Wednesday Debrief with Ian Sherwood (Sky News)

WINOL 10th November Bulletin Debrief

Have a grip on the story – through filming, editing, writing link, know what you’re saying. We need to be slightly aggressive in the way of telling the story.

The main responsibility of a journalist is to tell the news. Anticipate the package and quotes, play chess and don’t go out blind. What are you going to say?

Website: this week not as many IPs, not as many page views, social media needs a push as always.
The Diversity showcase got the most views – the package connected with the audience, potentially we could’ve made more of this

*New all time WINOL record 5400 Saturday – highest possible achievement*

Tighten up WinchXtra for a women audience – constantly think of how to build our audience. WINOL has not a very well defined audience – nobody’s fault but it is not as honed in on audience as if we were just chasing these stats. Hampshire chronicle focus on the very local and are figures lead

Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, social media tighten this up

Bulletin:

Very good heads – grabs etc, swelling is good, scripting is fine, sport shouldn’t be a mid shot zoom in on the action

Super tabloid human interest harvester – Toby did well, very emotive, legal difficulties to skirt around

Reaction of fans is the drama of football – invest the equipment and cameras then spam social media

We should have aggressive delivery in the bulletin- get rid of Hello and Welcome to Winchester, go more bang bang bang, get straight to the news

Wordy script for the HATE CRIME package – those facts should be in the package, worked with Ian on the link

The reason for the presenter is to avoid juxtaposition libel – the bookend for the packages, a buffer

BROOKE: Very good, pictures and anonymous interview is great, use the promo beautiful pictures made by someone else, good scripting, be more selective in packaging, tell the story don’t pile in the facts, still a bit broadsheet, art is to summarise, fact in your voice X claims etc – more punch for case study (QUOTE)

Blind sources, anonymous quotes – if in danger of persecution it’s fine. Prima facie defamation

Quotes should be short and have maximum impact, pan for gold to get the strongest quotes

Allowed to round up numbers in news, detail is enemy
Implicit and explicit consent – section 8 etc

Benefit from being cut in half, bit long, great to get him in to the studio, minding guests, total grip on guest know exactly what he’s going to say. Semi scripted – reverse questions in after, pre interview and make three points. Very good 2 way studios, good teaching, good doing
‘Special effect’ presenter again – open questions only

Harvester – good link. Great interview, shorten it still. Fact in PTC

Fire- very good pics, interview technically poor but quote at end, PTC sound wrong and eyeline wrong, straight to action, summarise statements, copy right issues?????

Southern water: sequence etc, involved vox pops like mini case studies, competent package, where is the water meter?

Heart: explicit consent in pics, good pics, good to get interviewee, quotes could be stronger

Pharmacist: good pictures, interviews straight to quote, great story, tell the story more

Sport: good presentation, need something to hold. Lacking in quotes, feature go pro cut between this and a wide shot perfect throw forward

Features: good BACKANO again

No main ingredients missing this time

WAXING FEATURE: Time lapse telling you how to do it, zoom into eyebrows from all different angles

WINOL 10th November Bulletin Debrief