Good UPSOT in heads – strong heads overall. Possibly get rid of the strap lines – slightly unnecessary especially with strong pics. Keep sport of fight scene running, that’s all you needed no jump cut, might as well carry on it is non league football after all about as good as you get
No need for welcome from Tate it jumped a little but superb otherwise throughout, wire tuck in but gallery team should’ve picked that up
Brian’s story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why did we miss this?! BBC Wales came and covered it, it’s our patch and award winners segment was missed – should’ve made more of it. *Be proud of what you do in this room*
Running order heavy and, death essentially lead the bulletin. Needed more light and shade that’s why we moved the OOV, a dark hard show. People don’t watch the news to be told everything is terrible
FERGUSON: tight for interview, full credit to get into show, grammar wrong, more float over interview?
Nothing in bulletin that was today, but interview made it today, make them local, students in Ferguson to relate
NHS: everything great, but go to the people protesting first, UNISON after, give that story a face straight away, empathy
PRISON GANG: really good piece and interview in studio good, credibility with two shot, prison gov good get, little more decisive and believe what you’re saying but this comes with time
Have the confidence to deliver what you’re saying
BADGERS: PTC really good and walk out of shot busy background good, in middle of demo, celebrity! Incredible, beyond student work, loved it
OOV make more from BJTC, gas explosion needs more was left asking and what?? Should have been spiked there was nothing new here to report
IoW: top line wrong
ONE WAY SYSTEM: good time lapse but too long – cutaway to different time lapse?
CHRISTMAS MARKET: needed lightening up, still heavy, should’ve been a nice lighter piece, feel good time
Communication in teams for sport order, because Christmas market package wasn’t as uplifting could’ve gone straight into highlights to change the pace
Basingstoke fact wrong
Mention 5th goal
Features: click bait, strong
Wine story into the show? Re-edited?
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