- good sound mix at the beginning but abrupt finish needs more blend
- link too much of a laugh think it looks not so professional
- sound still not quite right but presenting more natural even if a bit fast
- good duo presenting in Comic Con package, very natural but sound is a problem in these events – good sound mix over all package though with music bed etc
- good names from Comic Con and great voice over – it is the right tone. Daniel Radcliffe and Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles
- timelapse is a great idea and a great variety of shots and interviews
- great gonzo from Tate, her voice needs to be louder. Concept here was good could have made more of the gonzo
- Jacqueline Wilson great to get her – good to include Lucy’s questions in this instance
- very good from Sarah – good presentation and snappy edit
Good work – keep aiming for the big names and do more gonzo
megrosefisher 